Two boys, Charlie and Tom, one dog Koda. Charlie was twelve, he had beautiful brown tanned skin, his face was full of freckles, he had amazingly blue eyes and brown stuffy hair. Tom was ten, he also had beautiful tanned skin, he had brown eyes with dark brown hair. Koda had really soft white fur with brown spots dotted around. He also had a very distinctive brown zig zag between his ears. Koda had brown twinkling eyes, he seemed to also have an almost magic sounding bark.
Charlie was bored, he couldn’t think of anything to do at home, so he got Koda and went to Tom’s house to see if he wanted to go to the forest with him and Koda. Tom was home and he said that he would be happy to come.
They wandered down to the forest entrance, but something was weird there. The entrance was blocked off. It was fine the day before when they went so why was it closed today. All three of them sat there and even Koda was confused. They sat there for a while. Koda eventually got fed up though. He got up and looked around. Then he smelt something, it wasn’t the best smell in the world. It was like a pair of old smelly boots. He started to follow it.
“What are you doing boy?” asked Charlie.
“Woof woof!” barked Koda.
“Where’s he going?” asked Tom.
“I don’t know,” answered Charlie.
“He must have smelt something,” added Tom.
“Come on then let's follow him!” shouted Charlie, forgetting that he was shouting in front of like fifteen people.
Let’s go on an adventure!
So they followed Koda through a small opening in a bush. The bush was thicker than it looked. They ended up in the forest, a part they had never been to before.
They looked around and saw old stone ruins. They were beautiful buildings. They must have been very old, because they were overgrown with vines and weeds. But it had some very nice looking flowers. This was strange because it was the middle of winter.
“Look Too……..” stuttered Charlie.
Charlie turned round and saw a massive Wap! It was attacking Tom!
The Wap had big brown eyes and yellow and brown stripes; it also had a VERY big stinger.
“Tom!” shouted Charlie.
“Get out of there!”
“I can’t, he is too big!” shouted back Tom.
Suddenly Charlie jumped on the giant Wap and tried to tame it like a horse and for some weird and unexplainable reason though, it worked! The Wap was tamed! They walked over to the ruins with the giant wap following close behind. There on a pillar in the middle of a stone floor stood a pair of boots. The boots were black with flappy bits on the edges, they also had very comfy looking insoles. Tom and Charlie walked over to the pair of boots. Tom picked them up and all of them including the giant wap were knocked out!
Chapter Two
They woke up in a house, there was a warm light coming from a small, cozy fireplace. There next to the fireplace was a man. The old man had a long white beard, sparkly green eyes and a big smile on his face. Charlie and Tom looked up and saw a man with Koda and the giant Wap.
“ Oh you’re up!” he said with excitement.
“These are some wonderful pets you have here,” he added.
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